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Postby gray.weed95 » Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:26 pm

Do your worst! :) I personally do not like this piece. I would like to know what the worst parts are so I can get better. But just so everyone knows, in relation to my other work, this piece is very weak. It started out as a practice piece and I thought I'd do a street art inspired piece. You see how well that went... Haha!
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Re: Getting a feel for this forum

Postby nigelartist » Wed Apr 10, 2013 2:52 pm

Indecision seems the let down factor to me here. Indecision as to mouth, eyes and nose placement. I feel as if you should be more definite in your decision on how the work will develop before you started the underdrawing. You also have the word 'glitch' which seems you are setting yourself up before completion!

Best wishes and God bless.
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Re: Getting a feel for this forum

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Apr 10, 2013 2:57 pm

It looks to me like you're wanting
to work a 'shake-up' move with her.
Hard technique for drawing.
Why don't you find a photo of a girl
and copy-paste her image 5 or 6 times
spaced 1/18th of an inch apart (or less!)
If you want to try that with lips and eyes,
give it a whirl!
That way, you can really look at the
action and then draw from there.
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