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a country scene

Postby shinusha60 » Tue Jan 15, 2013 1:36 pm

A simple painting in acrylic. I want to add something more to make it a little bit more interesting,not sure what elements to add. Please share your ideas.
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Re: a country scene

Postby Singular » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:17 pm

Not bad, but the balance is definitely off. I think if you added some smaller trees in the mid and background on the right side, that might help. Also, the bumpout of the barn is also off a bit. The perspective needs to be corrected. It appears as though it is going straight downhill rather than forward.
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Re: a country scene

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:04 pm

I will respectfully disagree with Joe and of course, only IMHO -
I think this genre of work which feels 'folk', or illustrative,
can sustain the traditionally recognized technical 'faux pas'
and as a matter of fact, the mistakes add to the charm.
As well, reaching into my 'inner child' I also think the colors
are quite appealing. Thanks, E
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Re: a country scene

Postby Singular » Tue Jan 15, 2013 7:18 pm

I love when you disagree ;)

It comes to show you that art reaches everyone on a different level. I do agree with what E said. It does fall into the illustrative genre and the perspective issue is ok.
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Re: a country scene

Postby shinusha60 » Wed Jan 16, 2013 3:31 pm

Really appreciate your comments, am going to add some small trees.thank you for the input.
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