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Postby tostra » Mon Dec 03, 2012 11:54 am


Good&Evil.

Used pens, gouache and acrylic on this one. I could use some critique and comments, anyone? Thanks.
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Re: Latest drawing

Postby Amigone » Tue Dec 04, 2012 3:59 pm

I don't know if there's more to the red bit that's being cut off by the picture but I feel like there should be more of a red influence to the picture with that. Like you have the green. Right now it just looks like a red mistake on the edge of the page. I like what you're going for here though.
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Re: Latest drawing

Postby jenn_iam » Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:51 pm

I like the overall texture, and old fashioned feel to the peice... I am not sure I am a fan or am on the same page with you on the color additions... what are your intents with the Red and the Green?
I like your base tones, along with the sketchiness and the black... perhaps experimenting with sepia, or tea-staining looks may do this style wonders too.. :) Keep it up.
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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Re: Latest drawing

Postby ehoeveler » Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:49 pm

Colors OK by me - thing is, I wonder about the red
adequately suggesting 'evil'. Agree with Jenn on liking
the retro feel to this piece. E.
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Re: Latest drawing

Postby tostra » Tue Dec 18, 2012 1:33 pm

Red&Green were chosen because I needed "opposite colors". Next time I´ll take more time thinking it over. But thanks to y´all.
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Re: Latest drawing

Postby ehoeveler » Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:33 pm

My pleasure!
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Re: Latest drawing

Postby jenn_iam » Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:11 pm

Absolutely! :)
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