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i am new here,what y'all think of my work?

Postby shinusha60 » Fri Oct 05, 2012 2:45 am

I know it looks like a child's work,but then again I've no formal training.
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Re: i am new here,what y'all think of my work?

Postby Kristian_Saapunki » Fri Oct 05, 2012 5:20 am

Hi shinusha60!
I don’t think it looks like a child’s work.
In my opinion you have done well whit the colures. Like the way it looks like the 2 flowers are dancing in the wind.
However i would like to see more shadows, and high lights is missing. The background culd use some attention to.
I whole it look pretty good! Just not quite finished.

Have a good one!
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Re: i am new here,what y'all think of my work?

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Oct 05, 2012 6:16 am

Agree with ksart-se. These flowers are
quite nice - they show your love of this species.
Wouldn't hurt to put a little depth to the background.
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Re: i am new here,what y'all think of my work?

Postby alilspunsugar » Fri Oct 12, 2012 11:05 am

This isn't child-like at all! It actually reminds me of how I paint. I'm just getting started too. I think there maybe a little too many leaves on the flower on the right. I think I would either do what the other guys said and add shading or go the other way with it and make it all about the flowers with very sharp lines and lose the background (make it one color) altogether.
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Re: i am new here,what y'all think of my work?

Postby shinusha60 » Fri Oct 12, 2012 3:59 pm

I really appreciate all of your comments. I know I will master all of those techniques-although bit by bit.I used to draw a lot when I was a kid,never got the chance to learn it from a pro.
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