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Postby gyp2438 » Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:59 pm

a photography of a sketch also done by me. Any ANY comments appreciated.
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Re: Newcomer!

Postby Singular » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:46 pm

This is pretty good, and a difficult subject matter. I would like to see a bit more contrast. The values all seem very similar.

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Re: Newcomer!

Postby gyp2438 » Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:54 pm

Thanks for the comment! i'll work on it :)
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Re: Newcomer!

Postby ehoeveler » Wed Sep 26, 2012 3:34 pm

Adding to Joe's good advice - I love the concept of
this photo. Only thing - can you re-snap?
The model looks a tad out of focus.
Really nice idea!
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Re: Newcomer!

Postby Amigone » Thu Sep 27, 2012 9:09 am

The model gets lost in the darkness. The lace and shadow looks very nice but if you can bring out the model a bit more that would make it that much more stunning.
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Re: Newcomer!

Postby jenn_iam » Thu Sep 27, 2012 2:16 pm

I agree with the previous mentions.. however additionally, can you remove the items that are in the background. You lose the wire framework of the model in the miriad of lines in the background - making your drawing not match, in a way.

watch not only your balance in light/dark and contrast, but also in your placement. If your idea end result is the photo of the model and the art , then play with dynamics within the frame to best accentuate both, or make one more powerful over the other. Whatever you want to convey with the image, bring out in your composition.

Great work so far! Keep it up!
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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Re: Newcomer!

Postby gyp2438 » Fri Sep 28, 2012 5:35 am

Thank you for all your advices! I'll keep them up! :)
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Re: Newcomer!

Postby alilspunsugar » Fri Oct 12, 2012 12:37 pm

I love the concept! I agree that it would be more effective if you removed the objects in the background. Maybe set the sketch book on something darker to really draw the eye to it. Love it.
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