Dark side

[napalmsin]

the dark side of the hill

[Singular]

I love the idea and design of this and I think you are moving in the right direction. However, I do not think it is executed as well as your other work. It does not look as refined or finished. The tree is very dynamic and has great color. But the edges are sloppy. Clean up the lines and really make the sky pop. It is a bit blah. This could be a great piece if you work on finishing touches. Go the extra mile.

all the best,
Joe

[artbyJKB]

I love the idea and the colors. I feel like I'm in a dream when I look at it.

[sharkbarf]

Very dream like. Because it is blurry, along with the distorted angles, it looks like it is moving.

Great job explaining the milieux.
Now that the setting is there how about adding to the story...what else could be going on in this scene?

Overall- technically well done but conceptually uninteresting.