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Postby Cancer » Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:13 pm

SO I followed in the footsteps of many artists and did Marilyn Monroe. this is my version. Please tell me what you think :)
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Re: Marilyn

Postby Singular » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:34 pm

Fantastic. I think there are a few final touches that you could add. First, I recommend working on the shadow under the necklace on the left side of her neck. There doesn't seem to be any depth there and the necklace appears to be flat. I also recommend accentuating the dark areas (lowlights). The highlights look great, so the same must be done for the opposite.

Other than those small finishing touches, this is a great painting. Well done.

all the best,
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Re: Marilyn

Postby Cancer » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:38 pm

:) thanks alot Joe, I appreciate the comment and the positive critisism. I will work on the points mentioned :D
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Re: Marilyn

Postby johnwalkeasy » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:45 pm

I like it very much. And I agree with joe. And there are a lot of images of her. But she is a great subject.
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Re: Marilyn

Postby Cancer » Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:03 am

Thank you Johnwalkeasy, taking the time to comment is much appreciated :)
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