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Computer Generated Image Portrait of Selena T

Postby Michael Ortega » Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:32 am

My computer died so I was away in "real land" for awhile. This is my first CGI on this new computer...using GIMP...

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Postby johnwalkeasy » Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:11 pm

This is very colorful and
ight. I like it.
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:41 pm

i like the look of this to mike ..........she has got a great look on her face .nice work .mike :>)
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Postby Singular » Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:03 pm

Hey Michael,

Nice start. I think the hair could use more attention and detail. The color and depth are there. Now, adding some individuality to the hair is the next step. Also, I would add a bit more tone around the nose to make the transition more gentle, rather than a hard line. Same for the neck and chin area, the transition needs to be more gentlr. It is a bit choppy.

Your base is great. Like I said before, the color and depth are there. Now come the fine tuning.

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Postby Michael Ortega » Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:47 am

Thanks for all the positive comments! I will continue to work on this over the next few weeks, along with some other images! Yes it is a nice image...but does lack detail and a certain refinement...
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