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Please critique my painting

Postby artisticsha » Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:26 am

Go ahead and give me your opinion on this painting. Thanks for the honesty.
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Postby Erika Takacs » Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:44 pm

Very nice atmosphere and love the colours. From an artistic point of view I think it would benefit the painting if you increased the scale of your figures slightly. Distortion in proportion can be very helpful. You've chosen a difficult perspective, kudos for that.
Just curious, were you thinking of making prints of this for Christmas cards? It would look great.
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:28 pm

hello artisticsha ,,,,,,,,,,,,well first i like the look and the colors of this .

second ,,,and it is just the way i look at it is .........well the trees in the back look a bit like goal posts ....the two on the side of the Christmas trees......also The Christmas trees are a bit to center in the painting

if you look at the yellow line on the street you will see what i mean by center

but again i do like this one ,,,,,,,,,,,,it is just something that when i seen this right away the line in the street and the trees just botherd me

you no like i have always said here ,,,,,,,,,,,,,it is just the way i see it ,,,i am just one person with two eyes

and again i will always like your work ,,,,,,,,,,,you a very good painter

artwork is in the eyes of everyone ....................and everyone has there own feel for what they like .............what is wrong or right

i dont like saying much on peoples work ,,,,,,,,,,,see i no i am not mr perfect........... but just had to comment anyways

your friend i hope ............mike :>)
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Postby oilpainter2247 » Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:26 pm

artisticsha it has been a long time and i dont see you posting no more ,,,,,,,,,,i hope you are well and safe

if you are mad in any way from what i posted here i am sorry ........please reply when you can you have got some nice artwork and i would like to see more of it .

:D mike
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Postby arlenemurals » Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:32 pm

I absolutly love the color and feel of this painting it is reminicsent of the holiday season, I agree about the perspective though, the houses and buildings a re rendered nicly but your figures and cars look like a birdseye view from a skyscraper, I think the painting would be a winner if they were just a bit closer in scale. kudos , it really is lovely
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