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More pen and inks hot off the press

Postby rkalz@hotmail.com » Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:43 pm

Had some unexpected free time and was alone with a pen and some markers. Art happens. :twisted:
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Postby rips10 » Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:19 am

Very nice to me but I think all needs some background.best luck.
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Postby FinePencilArt » Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:04 am

I like the composition and the flow of the lines. It is kind of a challenge for me to see the entire pieces because the size is larger than my screen (pehaps it is the setting on my monitor). I do think the first and last one call out for just a bit of color. If it were my work I would be inclined to add color to the planet shape on the far right side of the first peice and to the heart shape on the bottom left of the third piece. The second piece has very strong and viberant colors but since I am having trouble seeing the whole piece at once I am unsure of it.
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