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Postby Jundo » Sat May 16, 2009 4:34 am

Hi,

Well it's been a while since I've been on the forum... Nice to be back.

I've been working on a big project to launch a web comic and I wanted to guage some feedback before it goes live. I'm going to create some weekly gag strips (four frame funnies like Garfield or Dilbert) based on the characters below... This is a business plan for me with the idea of selling them to websites and magazines in order to improve there traffic ([/b]See little terrors here first!) kinda thing.

It needs to be professional and up there with the best! I can't make a good amature attempt at this so I need to find out if this hits the mark.

Anyway.... Let me know what you think?

Many thanks

Tris

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Postby Michael Ortega » Sat May 16, 2009 11:48 am

Top notch, very well done. Your logo amuses me personally becouse it reminds me of "Pep Boys'" Manny, Moe and Jack.
A horrific Manny Moe and Jack! :twisted:

Keep it up...
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Postby BYart » Sat May 16, 2009 5:30 pm

Nice Jundo!

LOL! Logo does remind of pep boys... only their "evil twins" :D
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Postby Jundo » Sun May 17, 2009 3:00 pm

My first gag strip.


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Postby Michael Ortega » Sun May 17, 2009 4:38 pm

Cartoon as is all art, is subjective. As far as I can see, you pass muster son. Just keep drawing and you will only get better. You are already pretty damn good.
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Postby Danny Heim » Sun May 17, 2009 6:34 pm

excellent
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Postby krysta11 » Sun May 17, 2009 7:08 pm

Great talent!
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Postby Jundo » Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:47 am

Hi, the first set of gags. Feedback welcome, thanks for looking.

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