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Hello, would appreciate my peers feedback on this one

Postby Carpe Diem Soul » Tue Aug 15, 2006 6:07 pm

Hello Community members, here's a piece I juts completed and am open to your feedback...thanks so much for your time...Myztico
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Postby johnwalkeasy » Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:50 pm

Soul, Colors are very good. The skin tone is just right for this kind of colors. Snakes, skulls, Claws and stars.and simbols. This is one that,s nice to look at and think about. And again, colors are great.
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Thanks John

Postby Carpe Diem Soul » Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:10 pm

For giving me some feedback on this one as it took me a while to get all the colors to work well together, the symbols are spiritual in nature, when you get a chance feel free to visit my site for more samples of my work: http://myztico.mosaicglobe.com

feel free to share your work with me as well...Myztico
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Postby SONIC » Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:02 pm

It seems like you get lost in the details of subject matter that you enjoy.
Sooooo, what I'd suggest is don't be in too much of a rush to complete
a piece.
Step back and away often.
Once again, the pieces lack cohesiveness.

But, also once again, your attention to detail is obvious with
the trees and they steal the show and well
perhaps shouldn't.

They pull the viewers eye to the sides and away
from the core of the piece.

Which it seems would be where the focus of detail etc should be!
Think of the pieces you create as a fusing of color, space and
imagery.

All those facets considered, will give your
work more of the expected power it seems you
are visually seeking.

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Postby starvingartist » Wed Aug 23, 2006 5:30 pm

your paintings are very trippy my stoner cousin would really like them.
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