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Postby daniellemaree » Wed May 28, 2008 3:06 pm

Wow, so I'm ready to suck it up and get an honest opinion of my work:
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Postby Erika Takacs » Wed May 28, 2008 7:45 pm

Very nice work. I like it.
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Postby 357Lady » Mon Jun 02, 2008 8:57 pm

A very nice piece of work. I love the colors that you used & the expression of the subject. Though, it would be easier to see if the
file was abit smaller. That is just a suggestion to better be able to
view it though.
Wonderfully done. :)

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Postby xxbreezy » Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:46 am

I like this piece very much and I can tell alot of thought went into this. Love the color choices you made also....great job!!
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Postby roxy-foxy » Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:43 pm

This looks very interesting but I am not sure if your photo is good. It seems the darker colours are reflecting the light.
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Postby Makena Tile » Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:14 am

Question....Is this meant to be a child?
If so- I think the fingers should have less bony knuckles-
The hand currently looks like that of a real old person and creates confusion about what we are looking at (is it meant to be a child or an old person)

Our
ain uses visual clues to process what we are looking at. A child is identified in our mind as being a child based on visual clues: soft smooth shaped fingers= child. Thin, wrinkled, with bony knuckles=old person.
Your picture seems to be a child's face with an old persons hand.

When we see something other than expected- it causes our mind to focus on it- trying to process the visual clues that don't seem to fit.

Also- is her mouth open showing her teeth and lower lip? or is it closed and the lower part is her chin? The light reflection on the chin area makes it possible to being the lower lip. Not sure what you intended.


It is a wonderful style of art. Her eyes have nice depth to them-
It's a dreamy picture. Beautiful.
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Dont Worry!

Postby nigelartist » Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:35 am

Fantastic!

Love the colours the design...the look of horror!


9/10


Excellent!

Chalks??
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The colors are lovely.

Postby alizaryn » Sat Jun 07, 2008 3:55 pm

My only suggestion; (unless its the way you meant it to be) is to add a bit more of a spark of life to her eyes. Its reallt very nice, I love it.
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Postby abbyjonesart » Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:13 pm

The darks ought to be darker... like between the fingers. I like the overall composition and color choice. The texture seems at odds with the line on occasion, but perhaps if it weren't so big it wouldn't be so noticeable. I disagree about the hands. Beautiful, young or old. Ambiguity and mystery can add to the interest in a piece.
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