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Postby nosdrahciR » Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:13 am

Please give me some feed back on this painting... Any advise on technique or achieving a higher level of professionalism would be appreciated.
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Postby Singular » Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:28 am

I think you are well on your way. There are a few things I would work on with this painting. The ground work has already been laid. I just think you need to fine tune. For example, the hair has a lot of depth and color variaton. I would take it to the next level and refine the
ush strokes a bit with a very small, fine
ush to create more visible strands. Follow the dark contours with deep shadows and follow the light areas with highlights. I think you did a pretty good job with the face. I would make your light source a bit more evident or "dramatic" if you will. I also would give a bit of variation to your background. Not sure I would do it that dark.

But I think you are doing very well in your painting.

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