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Postby smoking nun » Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:15 am

You are crazy and beautiful and messed up and I am in love with you. Gaze upon that which I have offered with my humble and mighty ballpoint:

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Comment upon it as though your neighbor's retarded child had just set fire to some expensive personal item belonging to you.
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Postby Singular » Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:19 am

Hey there,
I checked out your work. I think that it is very expressive. Some I like, some I feel as though the lines are a bit heavy. Could you post a couple that you want us to specifically critique? Let me know if you need help doing so.

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Postby smoking nun » Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:22 am

How about this one?
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Postby smoking nun » Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:26 am

Or this one.
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Postby nosdrahciR » Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:20 am

very nice, besides just being partial to your drawings I like the flow and the way that it draws my eye. Very imaginative and creative.
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Postby Singular » Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:32 am

I agree. Very imaginative and well designed. I would however work on using more shades of the pencil. It looks as though you use a few pencils in the midrange or increase pressure with the same pencil to darken the stroke. I would experiment with the entire range of pencil tone to increase the depth of your drawings.

keep up the good work.

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Postby johnwalkeasy » Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:52 pm

I really like these drawings. Bet you drove your teachers crazy in school. LOL.
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Postby dallen88 » Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:24 am

These are some great character designs! However I'd like to see more gradual shading built up in each. Take a close look at how Leonardo da Vinci used line variation and intensity to build shading in his drawings. I think that by adding more gradual shading these images will be even more impressive.
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