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Is this finished?

Postby behrcsu » Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:13 pm

I welcome comments and thoughts on these unfinished pieces.

Zagros Mountains, Sunset
16"x20"
oil on canvas

Pastoral Ireland
20"x24"
oil on canvas
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Postby Parabola » Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:38 am

I quite like the second.

The first one should have more tone. The greens are too green and the yellows are too yellow.

Keep it up!

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Postby behrcsu » Wed Jul 12, 2006 3:22 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on the Zagros Mountains painting and have put some final touches on 'Pastoral Ireland'. Here is a decent photo of 'Pastoral Ireland'. I firmed up the horse and changed the cowboy to a little girl.
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Postby dallen88 » Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:29 am

behrcsu wrote:Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on the Zagros Mountains painting and have put some final touches on 'Pastoral Ireland'. Here is a decent photo of 'Pastoral Ireland'. I firmed up the horse and changed the cowboy to a little girl.


The changes that you have made to the 'Pastoral Ireland' painting really add a greater sense of depth to the overall image. Nice work.
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