by IRMA BACKELANT » Sat Dec 22, 2007 11:55 pm
really good start - potential there for sure.
first one, turn head more instead of face on for more interest, shade cheeks heavier so check bone more prominent, reduce mascara look for more naturalness, reduce size(width) of neck
second one, eyes are cockeyed, again try turn head as one would in a portrait. don't know what is coming off neck, if a scarf not distinct enough so now is a distraction or artifact
third is the best because it is suggestive and adds interest by mystery.
good luck
Ij