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I am ready for the fury

Postby ddt642 » Fri Aug 16, 2019 5:57 pm

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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby Singular » Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:12 pm

Good work. There is a lot of good going on here. The colors are very good. Contrast is also good, with good depth. The one thing I would critique is the proportions. The face appears tp be a bit too small in comparison to the body. The neck is a bit elongated and the neck and trapezius area are a bit off. I would also like to see a bit more attentiona and detail in the hands.

Overall, nice work!
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Re: I am ready for the fury

Postby ddt642 » Sun Aug 18, 2019 10:05 pm

Thank you. You are right about everything. I think I concentrated on getting the face right and did not give enough attention to the rest of the body. Watercolor is a challenge for portraits especially for creating details.
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