Feedback and critique

[JAS]

This is a mixed media piece I did, I vary in quite a range of subject matter but concept/abstract is my favorite.
Would love feedback on the piece inspired by South African graffiti. Thank you.

[Singular]

I love the design and I think you executed well. But I do think that it would be even better if you refined it a bit. It looks a bit unfinished and I know that might have been your goal. But some of the lines could be cleaner and some of the areas could have some final touches added. Overall, nice work though.

[JAS]

Thank you so much for your reply, really appreciate it. I did want it to have a slight unfinished look and did not want to overdue it (as I normally do), maybe I will add some more details.