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Postby LookBacktoFour » Wed Jan 27, 2016 12:54 pm

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Re: I Call This One "Reverse Ice Cream Sandwich"

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Jan 27, 2016 1:46 pm

Entertaining... is this done??? you posted in Work in Progress, are you still working on it?
I would expect to see the fella's hands on the girls sides, if looking proportionately to his body length, and to the waist width of the girls.
Watch the fold lines in his shorts... straight lines imply 'flat' vs. legs and groin being round. maybe also some shadow of tone to the inner pant leg, similarly to what you did with the shadow on the girls forms. Good application of highlights (shine) and shadow to most everything.. I would add a bit to the water.
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Re: I Call This One "Reverse Ice Cream Sandwich"

Postby Singular » Wed Jan 27, 2016 10:27 pm

Moved to the critique forum since you are asking for feedback. Overall a nice job. In addition to what Jenn said, I will be picky and say that your lines in certain areas could be cleaner, especially where there is a curve. You have to really be patient and make sure that the curves on the female anatomy are precise and clean. Will just take a bit more of your time, but not rushing through it will make a difference.

Nice work though!
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