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Striving Young Artist

Postby jjohnson29832 » Mon Jan 18, 2016 8:00 pm

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Re: Striving Young Artist

Postby CarlOwen » Mon Jan 18, 2016 10:03 pm

I see you have entered this forum. Before I proceed I need your permission to give you what I see as a real critique of your work. But you also must know two things. First, there is no separation between the artist and the art work presented. Second, if you can get over the sting, you must read my comments a few times to understand what you need to do in order to grow. It is your decision to continue.
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Re: Striving Young Artist

Postby Eralune » Mon Feb 29, 2016 4:53 pm

Your proportions are great, but you need to darken everything -- maybe play with some charcoal or at least some darker graphites. Everything you need to put in that piece is there, but it just needs more value, more shading, and more darker colors.
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