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"a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Mo Salih » Sun Dec 13, 2015 5:15 pm

hello ..
This is the first painting I post in this forum since I'm a fresh member .. I already introduced my self in the new members forum

I apologies for the poor quality of the image but unfortunately the original is not at my disposal now and this the only digital copy i have

I named it "a massive dream" and it's one my favorite experiences ..
waiting for your comments and assessments

thanks alot
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Tahina » Sun Dec 13, 2015 9:30 pm

super creative. I like your dark shadows drawing the eye to the light in the center and your images scare me... In a mysterious way. Unique piece. keep up the great work, Tahina
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Mo Salih » Sun Dec 13, 2015 10:51 pm

thank you tahina ^_^ I appreciate your words
many of my friends had the same scary impression of "genocide" or "massive death" instead of "massive dream"
however these people are meant to be asleep not dead
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Singular » Mon Dec 14, 2015 8:50 am

Really like this piece. You have talent. The colors are beautiful and the mood you created is perfect. Very nicely done.

My only critique is that I would like the faces in the foreground to be a bit sharper and cleaner. Everything else is perfect.
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Mo Salih » Mon Dec 14, 2015 1:18 pm

Singular .. thanks alot for the comment ^_^
my guess was that non-detailed faces will add some mysterious impression
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby ehoeveler » Mon Dec 14, 2015 3:44 pm

Agree with all comments. I would love to know why
you've used the frame as a top defining point but I don't care - love it! E
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Mo Salih » Mon Dec 14, 2015 7:56 pm

thanks ehoeveler :)
I'm not sure if I understood your comment .. I guess you mean the frame seems more clearly detailed
I didn't do this in purpose so it's simply a fault

thanks again
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby ehoeveler » Mon Dec 14, 2015 11:49 pm

Oh, No! The frame is awesome - I'm wondering why you used that in your piece, that's all. E
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby Mo Salih » Tue Dec 15, 2015 12:26 pm

it is about people escaping from the sad and narrow (framed) reality to the unlimited (unframed) world of dream .. the frame represents the reality
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Re: "a massive dream" .. Oil on canvas

Postby jenn_iam » Tue Dec 29, 2015 3:56 pm

I ally like this... Great composition, colors.. Even like the impressionistic feel (blur) to it. Would like a little more facial contour definition... But all in all, love it!
May your world be painted in the Brightest of colors!

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