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Crystalline

Postby woundedheartsmakeart » Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:44 pm

This piece is titled, "Crystalline". Something feels off to me, but I can't quite place my finger on in. Any feedback on what I should do to improve or further develop this piece would be fantastic.

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Re: Crystalline

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:26 pm

The hair is perfection. I'd soften those planar lines but keep the colors for her face. Nice Job! Thank You, E
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Re: Crystalline

Postby woundedheartsmakeart » Thu Sep 17, 2015 8:32 pm

I think your suggestion to soften the geometric dividers was spot on. Here is the updated version :D

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Re: Crystalline

Postby woundedheartsmakeart » Thu Sep 17, 2015 10:11 pm

After further tweaking, here is the final result:

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Re: Crystalline

Postby ehoeveler » Thu Sep 17, 2015 11:14 pm

Awesome - both versions! Welll, I actually prefer the bottom green...Thanks, E
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