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Critique needed on drawing of a walkman girl

Postby mewtiful » Thu Jul 23, 2015 9:03 pm

Hello
I am trying to improve my cartooning skills, and I would greatly appreciate any critique on the picture I'm working on. In particular the line quality, drapery, and anatomy

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Re: Critique needed on drawing of a walkman girl

Postby CarlOwen » Fri Jul 24, 2015 7:38 am

Boy, I wish I could get that lost in joy. Really a cute cartoon figure. But since you ask, the wrists look just a little thin to me. They catch my eye and shouldn't. The ankle on the foreshortened rear foot also look about a line's width to narrow also. Hope this helps.
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