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Mountain theme cont'd

Postby chris22 » Sun Aug 11, 2013 4:43 pm

Still stuck on the mountain theme, used mostly a knife for both pieces had some trouble with the clouds and mountain peaks on the first one. I really love the look that palette knives bring to paintings. Anyway like to hear any feedback anything to improve.
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Might go back to try and fix up these mountain peaks aswell, looks a little off to me and maybe too much snow
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Re: Mountain theme cont'd

Postby ehoeveler » Sun Aug 11, 2013 5:21 pm

Hi, Chris. I commented on both of your pieces though others are free to comment, as well.
Check your gallery. Thanks, E
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Re: Mountain theme cont'd

Postby Endlessfun » Mon Aug 12, 2013 1:29 pm

You really have to create prelim sketches that are going to guide you.
Take a wad of photo copy paper and make haphazard 10 -20 triangles - and imagine some as void and some as solid
If that dont work throw ink against the wall see what that brings up
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Re: Mountain theme cont'd

Postby nigelartist » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:52 am

I think your works would look much better if you took better photographs of them. However as they stand they are pleasant artworks.

Well done.

Nigel

God bless.
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