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original comic page one

Postby mikemontalvo » Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:48 pm

I am currently working on my own comic. I am doing all of it by myself so it may come slowly but I have been on it for quite some time. The comic is entitled Optmystical Man "The Death of the Optmystic." The way this character came to be created is a story in itself. I was going through a divorce and ran into an old flame who was also going through a divorce; so we hooked up. My friend had been going through the divorce longer than me so she thought she would warn me not to be too optimistic. So I created Optmystical Man as a way of venting any despair I might experience. When a friend saw the cover I had created he remarked, "Who is the side-kick Pessimistic Bitch." I thought that was so funny I continued the storyline and formally named the female character Pessimistic Bitch. I cant tell you any more about the story or it will give away my comic so you will have to wait for the next page. Sorry but I'm hurrying. :)
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Re: original comic page one

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:18 am

You mean, Optimistical, dpn't you?
Lol -Like all of us, we need to keep that Spelll-check Handy!
Whow, your figures are dramatically colored and in such an emotional story-line,
if a bit vague. Page lay-out is inviting and drawings are Classic Comic Book!
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Re: original comic page one

Postby mikemontalvo » Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:23 pm

No spelling is correct. I wanted to highlight mystical. LOL Thanks for all the great feedback.
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Re: original comic page one

Postby ehoeveler » Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:34 pm

That fights with the English major in me but
go ahead on with your bad self!
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Re: original comic page one

Postby mikemontalvo » Fri Jan 04, 2013 7:40 pm

LOL I'm an English major too. Just call it poetic license.
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Re: original comic page one

Postby ehoeveler » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:52 pm

Oh...My-God. Did you spell 'License' correctly? E
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