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This is a forum where you can post your art work and ask what the world thinks. I am looking for general feedback, nothing too technical. A push in the right direction would be appreciated.

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Postby rifkak » Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:39 pm

18"x24" acrylic painting on canvas
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Postby hollieleffel » Thu Jun 03, 2010 10:25 am

I really like this. The concept is a very peaceful landscape. I would say I think a few more details would really make this pop. A few more light tones and a few more shaded tones would give it some depth. I think even just deciding where the light is coming from, which direction I mean and adding some shading on the dark side of the object and light on the light side (such as the house) would make this great painting even better!
I'm not very good at critiquing so I'm sorry if this doesn't come out right :)
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Postby rifkak » Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:09 pm

thanks for your suggestions they really sound good. & i think I understood your points very well thanks again
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Postby agrajtech12 » Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:15 am

Wow!! its really nice and peaceful painting but it need bit work on light shade and
ightness..
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Postby rifkak » Wed Jul 21, 2010 3:31 pm

thanks
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