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This is a forum where you can post your art work and ask what the world thinks. I am looking for general feedback, nothing too technical. A push in the right direction would be appreciated.

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a painting in progress!

Postby creatamart » Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:28 pm

Hello, here is one that is almost finished. It is oil on canvas 6ft x 3ft.

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Postby Singular » Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:24 am

This is good. I like it. It gives much for the viewer to look at. There are some interesteing shapes and designs that make up the design as a whole. I only have one recommendation. Everything seems to be of the same strength and tone. The colors are all very strong. I would perhaps incorporate some softer, warmer colors in the background, or maybe some different colors in the foregorund to make things stand out more. Everything seems to be competing for attention.

But I do think this is very well done.

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Postby creatamart » Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:45 pm

i agree, i am working on the figures to stand out more. thanks for the input.
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Postby SONIC » Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:39 pm

:D Hey! Interesting the way the figures go in and out of the foreground.
I like it just for it's impact. I'm not sure what objective you have.
I will say that I don't think that the figures need to be accentuated if it's your intent to say, show how energy is not only around us but through us a part of us etc.
But, if there is something that you are trying to put forth it is not apparent.

Art for art's sake is cool as aesthetics
are what
ing you joy and perhaps even make you laugh.

I could definitely see you working with kids.

Well, I get that you enjoy what you do and that's key.
I will also say at this scale there is no reason to accentuate
anything.
Even on my screen of many pixels I get the full frontal impact
and I think in my humble opinion that you should keep exploring in this place that you have created for yourself.

Always push the boundaries but ultimately be true to yourself.
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IT WILL BE NOT ONLY MANIFESTED
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Postby cedric2001 » Tue Sep 26, 2006 4:36 pm

I love it ...keep up the good work
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