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This is a forum where you can post your art work and ask what the world thinks. I am looking for general feedback, nothing too technical. A push in the right direction would be appreciated.

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Postby daniellemaree » Tue May 27, 2008 2:05 pm

Hi, my first time posting here. I would appreciate your feedback on some recent paintings.

Thanks,
Danielle
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Postby Erika Takacs » Wed May 28, 2008 2:45 pm

Is this a finished work? I think I would develop it further by adding a few more colours
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Postby daniellemaree » Wed May 28, 2008 3:11 pm

Yes, it's finished. I wanted to make it suggestive and wanted to implement self control. The look is not necessarily most pleasing, but I wanted to experiment with layering and depth of colour in the background.
Thanks for your response. I may rework with more colour/depth.

Any other comments welcome!
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Postby BAReam » Wed May 28, 2008 6:59 pm

I tend to agree with Ericka on the development. You might use your base green/
own hue and use that as a kind of monochromatic theme in the subject area; a more or less full range of values based on that color.

all the best... BAReam
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Postby krysta11 » Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:19 pm

For me your abstract is very nice. I can see dog's portrait. Can't give you better advice than Erika and BAReam. They always offer professional help.
all the best Danielle
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