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Feedback please

Postby Jenny Geldart » Mon Dec 04, 2017 12:00 am

Any feedback is welcome
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Re: Feedback please

Postby Singular » Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:51 pm

Hi there. Welcome aboard. Good drawing and good likeness. I would now like to see you do something else with the composition, rather than just the seashell.
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Re: Feedback please

Postby Jenny Geldart » Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:58 pm

hmmm, OK - I'll see what I can up with. Thanks for your feedback Singular.
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Re: Feedback please

Postby jenn_iam » Wed Dec 06, 2017 12:33 pm

Hi Jenny ... Watercolor, correct?
I agree with Singular, the shell itself looks very good... but having nothing on the background, I'm afraid, washes out the subject. Even shadows, light treatments to both the shell and the background would help bring it to life.

keep going, its looking really nice!
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